The scent, the feel, the touch-
No chance to wait that much.
Sincere, deep and strong-
No way to wait that long.
No need to be explained-
It’s all in blood and vein.
Much more than words can tell-
The charm and magic spell.
So pure and divine-
It couldn’t be confined
To scope of time and space,
The beauty, trait and grace.
As though has always been
Acute, astute and keen.
The sense, the look, the feel,
At times it seems unreal,
But glance of smoky eyes
Resembles paradise.
And somewhere deep inside
I know — this is my ride!
My ride, 26/10/2014, 23:19
Unreal indeed…A glance into the deepest corners of the soul…Perhaps no one could be so sensitive and precise…Deeply impressed…Really excited…No words can tell…
Какие слова! Я в восторге!
Спасибо!!!
These sensual lines filled with real feelings are very impressive.
What a beautiful poem. Just wow….
Very nicely written.Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job 🙂
What a beautiful poem. Just wow…. Very nicely written.Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job.
В этом стихе чувствуется мелодия и чувственность. Надо положить это на музыку.
And somewhere deep inside
I know – this is my ride!
that is extremely good, so that despite i seldom read poets, but it actually made me read more, and that will do to express my opinion about the poet. thanx to our Director of Executive Comittee;)
Sabahstudent
Excuses. i meant poem(s), not poet(s) 🙂
Woow )))amazing 🙂 (y)